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Pity Pool Fuck [ 8 ]

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The next day I didn’t see Finn until later that night, when we both went to the Carson Brothers House. Ever since middle school the Carson brother threw tons of parties, but the Spring Break party was always the best. Debauchery at it’s finest. People got drunk, high, and fucked. Everyone in school came, nobody was turned away, it was such a huge party, that even other schools would come to their Spring Break party.  Their house was on private property, and they had ridiculous amounts of land, so the cops were never called by neighbors. It was a key party, the boys always took the keys of whoever was driving. They even paid one of their friends to always be sober and keep an eye on anyone trying to drink and drive. That was their parents only rule. Most parents of kids who attended were alright with this rule too.  

The Carson Brothers had actually graduated a year before me. But they still came home on spring break to carry on tradition. Other people that went to highschool with us, would make sure to come home from colleges across the country, just to make sure they got to attend the madness. 

My friends Jessica and Megan were back in town as well, so we all rode together to the party. The amount of cars on the property seemed a little less than last year, but by no means was it not absolutely packed. Cars were already lining themselves along the length of the long driveway, and starting to go out into the main road.  Their senior year, the cars were parked, up to a half mile on both sides of the road. It was only 7pm when we arrived, the party always started around noon, and went until noon the next day. Most people stayed from 12 to 12. We showed up late just because we didn’t want to seem to eager to be there. Ya know, “be cool”. 

As we walked up we giggled at the sight of current seniors, all dolled up in cute little party dresses. It was weird how i’d only graduated last year, but had been to so many parties this year, and my senior year, that I was over getting all dolled up for every party I went to. I could tell by looking around, which girls were in college like myself, and which were living their best life their senior year trying to impress the Kyle’s , even though we all knew, 90% of us were going to end up a fucking mess and shitfaced.

We rode in Megan’s car so she dangled her keys over the giant fishbowl that was being manned in the middle of the top of the driveway. 

“Hey Sterns” she gave a little wink. “You bowl bitch this year?” Megan said to the senior sitting at the bowl. He gave a little nod. 

He laughed. “Yep, lucky me” he said. 

“How much they payin ya?“

He shrugs. “I offered.”

She scrunches her nose. “God, why?” 

He laughs. “Have a girlfriend....best to keep myself sober if I want to still have one tomorrow morning.”

My brows rose in surprise, and I nodded.

“Lucky girl to have a nice guy like you.” I said. His eyes looked at me, up and down, I saw them stop on my tits, and then look back down my tight blue jeans. 

“I’m not a nice guy.” he said with a little smirk. 

“Hmm” I raised a brow, yes, I was flirting with someone elses boyfriend. So what, it was just flirting. 

Megan and Jessica laughed, and grabbed my arm. “Alright LETS go” Jessica said giggling. Sterns cocked a brow at me, turning to watch me, and me turning my head back to watch him as my friends dragged me up the rest of the drive. I gave him a quick wink and then turned around and walked with them laughing. 

“We just got here, jesus, at least take a look at your options first Fiona” Jessica reminded me. 

As far as I was concerned there was only one option tonight, and we shared the same DNA. But I couldn’t tell them that. 

“Whaaaat?”” I laughed. “He’s a cutie”

“With a girlfriend!” screeched Megan.

I threw my head back. “That’s rich coming from the girl who fucked her married professor” I taunted her. She gasped.

“Shh! Keep it down! You two are the only ones who know about that!” she hushed me. 

“Us and mister small dick Danny” I teased again. She gasped and slapped my arm as me and Jessica burst into laughter. 

That’s what we called her professor, because he apparently was not a grower, or a shower. His dick stayed a non impressive estimated three inches according to Megan. 

“I’m never telling you guys anything ever again!” she said with a small laugh. 

“Holy...shit” Jessica said and me and MEgan looked to her, eyes bulged, jaw open. We followed her gaze.

“Is that...Finn?” she pointed. 

It was. My brother was shirtless, wearing a pair of hunter green swim trunks and a pair of sandals. Standing at the end of one of the many beer pong tables that were set up around the property. Hand in the air, he tossed a white ping pong ball into the last cup on the other side of the table and him and his friend whooped and hollered that they won, smacking each others back. His body looked fucking good, somehow better than when I had my eyes and hands all over it last night.  His shorts were low on his waist, exposing that ridiculous little V shape that was currently soaking my fucking panties, and his abs, his fucking arms flexing as him and his friend did some ridiculous bro hug and hand shake. 

“Yep” I say. 

“holy shit.” Jessica says.

“Yea...holy shit.” Megan says. 

“Gross guys.” I said, trying to pretend I didn’t see what they saw in my little brother. 

“He’s um....grown up some since last year?” Jessica said trying to find the right words. 

“Oh shut up” I said slapping her arm with the back of my hand and walking over towards the table and the small crowd of people.

They giggled and we all greeted those that we knew, that we passed as we walked to the table. 

As the game was being reset on the other end Finn looked up. 

His eyes went right to me, as if he somehow sense me. A little smirk played at his lip and he gave a welcoming nod. 

“Did they cheat again?” I asked the two girls at the end of the table that just lost to the boys. 

The girls laughed, they seemed a little familiar, probably senior girls. 

“Nope we won fair and square” Said Tilson my brothers best friend. 

“now! pay up!” Tilson said. 

The girls looked hesitant. 

“You bet them on the game?” I asked. They nod. I shook my head.

“What’d ya bet?” I ask. 

“We have to flash them” they said. 

I look to my brother who just shrugs and throws up his hands. 

“They offered!” he says, Tilson agrees. 

I look to the girls. “they don’t deserve to see your racks.” I tell them and then look back at my brother and Tilson and shake my head. 

I nod them away from the table and the girls hang their heads slightly and giggle as the boys groan. 

“What the hell Fiona” Tilson grumbles. 

I look at the girls then back at my brother and Tilson. 

“Double or nothing.” I say. “Me against Finn” 

“I win. Tilson. I’ll flash you.” I say. 

Tilson’s jaw drops, so does my brothers. It’s no secret all my brothers friends, especially Tilson because he was at our house so much, have a thing for me.  Tilson nods, jaw still slack. 

“that’s lame, I dont want my sisters tits as a prize” Finn says, playing along so well with the fact we have to pretend he didn’t make me cum by simply touching said tits and their nipples last night. 

“Well gross, I don’t want to give you my tits as a prize you weirdo” I say. 

“Jessica will flash you” I say.” AND, both of these lovely ladies will show theirs to you as well” I say gesturing to the girls who just lost. 

“Fine. Bet” Tilson nods. Finn gives him a look, but Tilson’s eyes are zeroed in on his possible prize beneath my tight white t shirt.

“Fine” Finn grumbles.

“I heard my name” Jessica says.

“Yeah, were playing against them...if we lose...we have to flash them..you’ll flash Finn, I’ll flash Tilson.” I say. 

Jessica shrugs, then gets a mischievous grin. “If we win?” She looks over to my brother, eyeing him up and down. He laughs. 

“then they have to kiss our asses, literally. Lips to butt cheeks.” I say. Everyone laughs. 

“Deal” the boys shrug. The two other girls are giggling. 

“Kick their ass!” the one yells and I give her a thumbs up. 

---

Ladies first rule, ends up with me and Jessica sinking every, single, one in the first round. The girls next to us are laughing as me and Jessica wave to the cups in front of us for them to come drink. 

“I forgot they were good at this” Tilson says. 

Me and Jess, were the undefeated Beer Pong champs the past two years at the beer pong tournaments the seniors always held the last week of school. 

We didn’t lose once, either year. Not sure how THIS was our skill, but it saved those two girls from having to show their tits when it seemed like they didnt really want to. 

After the beers are done, I announce to the crowd that we have won, not that anyone really cares, but then I announce that Finn and Tilson will now be literally kissing our asses as punishment, and tell them to be sure to snap chat, take pics and post it to their stories. My brother blushes slightly and wipes his hand over his face and me and Jess and the girls laugh. 

“Ladies, you first” I say and gesture to the girls. They pull up their dresses, both of their asses covered by bikini bottoms underneath, Tilson and Finn each place a kiss on the girls ass closest to them, and then they switch, and place a kiss on the other girls ass. I laugh. The boys stand back up straight, the girls giggling. Tilson grabs their asses. The girls giggle and Finn just shakes his head laughing as everyone cheers.

“Our turn!” Jess says and she unzips her jean shorts and pulls them down and turns her ass to my brother and  and Tilson. 

“Get a pic!” She squeals. I laugh. I snap a pic of the two good sports, posing with their lips , on either side of Jess’s ass. I laugh and snap as many as I can. 

“Looking good boys” I laugh. 

They stand and Jess, hops over to me, her ass still hanging out of her shorts, to get her phone. 

“What about you?” Tilson says, pointing to me. 

I laugh and shake my head. 

“I’m good.” 

“A bet is a bet. Cmon” he says. 

“My brother is not kissing my ass.” I say. 

“Fuck him...i just wanna see that ass” Tilson says. I throw my head back and laugh as Finn punches Tilson in the arm.

“Whaaat bro?!” he says rubbing his arm. 

“Sorry Tilson.” I say and smack my ass with my hand. “You can look but ya cant touch” I tease. He groans. 

“FIONA FORTUNE?!” I heard the familiar voice and turn slightly. It’s the Carson brothers. I squeal when before I can even respond they’re both running to me and Penn is picking me up, scooping me up off my feet into his arms like a baby. 

“The party is here!” He yells and sets me down and I laugh as his twin brother Jace picks me up at the waist and lifts me. 

Then Penn greets Jess and Megan. Rumor has it that me and my girls had a small orgy Sophmore year with the boys. And rumor would be correct. I can tell by the way some people are whispering, that the rumor still circulates till this day. Mainly because, it took place on school grounds, in the boys locker room. 

We’d gotten caught. Big time. We were all suspended for two weeks, and had to volunteer at daycare’s afterschool. To scare us out of sex apparently, by throwing us into large groups of screaming kids. 

It didn’t work. 

Jace still has his arm around my waist, when he says hi to Megan and Jess and his hand slips down to my hip after they turn to Penn. Jace and I did a short stint of dating his senior year. Two whole months. My heart was broken when he dumped me. But i’d grown up, and gotten over it. Whenever he was back in town my junior and sophmore year, we’d hook up. 

By the way his hands were roaming my sides and to my ass as he pulled me into him, he was expecting a repeat. 

“Do you need a drink first, or can I get some of this now?” He asked quietly in my ear. I laughed and pushed him back. 

“Down boy” I said. “Get me a drink.” I said and he licked his lips. 

“Yes ma’am”he said and grabbed my hand and I followed looking over my shoulder. Finn was watching, but he was smiling at the people to him too, his eyes looking back to them and then to me. He shook his head at me with a little laugh. I gave a little wink and then turned and followed Jace. 

Jace took my hand, and took my through the ridiculous sized mansion, way more than a family of five needed. It was their parents, the boys, and their little sister, who was only just a freshman this year, and was with their parents on whatever vacation they were on. 

“What about my drink?” I teased and Jace growled at me, eyebrows pinched, jokingly. I laughed and followed him to his room. He shut his door and set down his beer and then his hands were at my jeans unbuttoning them. 

“Jesus” I laughed watching him, letting him undress me. 

“Fuck, I’m so god damn horny, I’ve been waiting for you to fucking get here all god damn day.” he says and pushes down my jeans, I laugh stepping out of them,

“Didn’t know my vagina was schedule to be here by a certain time” I say. He laughs and pushes me back against his bed. I sit down and lean back on my elbows. 

“Fuck, you have always been so fucking hot” he says and pushes down his shorts. 

“I want your mouth” he says taking out his cock. 

“Too bad.” I say and spread my legs. I pull my panties to the side, showing him I’m already wet. No thanks to him really, but thanks to vision of my shirtless brother. 

“Get a condom and fuck me” I say. 

He grins and curses. “Fuck..fine” he walks over to his dresser, pulls one out and  he grins, rips it open with his teeth, tosses the wrapper and slips it on. 

“Remember the locker room?” he grinned. 

I roll my eyes. “Yes Jace, i remember.” I laugh , because he asks me everytime we hook up.

He laughs. “Don’t be a bitch, it was fucking hot.” he says and he pulls me to the edge of the bed and grabs my panties and pulls them down. 

I laugh a little and he spreads my legs up as my panties come off my feet. 

“The only time you ever let me cum inside you” he says, rubbing his cock against my slit. I bite my lip. 

“I know. I was stupid.”I say. 

“But it felt so fucking good” he says sliding the head of his cock against my aching hole. 

“I bet it did...but you’re not fucking me without a condom Jace” I say. 

He groaned, and looked down. “Come on...please...i’ll be careful...I wont cum inside you” 

“Jace...I dont know where you dick has been, and you dont know where my pussy has been...shut up...and get inside of me.” I say. 

He looks at me and sighs and grumbles, but he slides in and his mood is changed. 

He curses as he fills me, one solid thrust, filling me. I moan and curse. 

“You been getting fucked at college?” he groans, sliding out and thrusting back in. 

I nod. “mmhm” 

“How the fuck you keep this pussy so tight for me baby?” he grins. I want to roll my eyes at him calling me baby. 

“Your dick is just SO big” I say, teasing him and he catches it and smirks. 

“You’re a brat, you know that?” he says and thrusts into me again hard. I yelp slightly and bite my lip and then grin. 

“Then punish me Jace.” I cock my brow and he grins. 

___

After ten minutes me and Jace are both sliding our clothes back on and returning to the party.

“Catch ya later Fi” he says smacking my ass at the bottom of the stairs.

I laugh and shrug. “Maybe” I say without turning to look back at him.

“There she is” my brother says as I walk back outside smoothing my hair.

I turn and see him Jessica and Megan and a group of others. Some of our other friends from high school.

“Yah. She took off in the first like five minutes to get her obligatory dicking from Jace” Megan says with a teasing giggle.

The other girls all laugh and I shrug.

“We just talked” I say with a smirk and eye roll. Letting them know I’m lying but without “kissing” and telling.

“Uh huh.” Megan says laughing. My brother cocks his brow, he licks his lips. I’m the only one that catches it. Surely he’s thinking about fucking me now too. And the feeling is mutual. While Jace and I usually have hot fucking sex , it just wasn’t the same. And only left me more unsatisfied and I knew what could satisfy my hunger. And he was 6’4” , currently shirtless and his tan was now showing a light shade of pink on his shoulders and tip of his nose and cheeks, and shared my dna.

I licked my lips casually and then we all stood there for a bit and I announced I was going to the restroom.

I walked inside and saw there was a small line for the downstairs so I went upstairs instead.

After using the private restroom in the boys parents bedroom I walked out and jumped when I was pushed back in by Finn.

“Jesus you scared me!” I say and he shuts the door locking it behind him and then grabs my waist and pushes me back into the massive bathroom and up against the sink.

I grin.

“What do you think you’re doing?” I ask and gasp when he lifts me up onto the long sink counter top and plops me on my ass.

“You fuck him?” He asks. His hands on my hips, standing between my legs.

“Yes.” I say and he gives me a little smirk.

“How was it?” He says his thumbs skimming the skin above the waist of my jeans beneath my white t shirt.

“Satisfactory. 3 out of 5 stars” I say. He gives a little laugh.

“I’m looking for that five out of five though” I cock my brow and grab his torso at the sides and pull him closer looking up at him.

He grins as my hands slide down to his shorts and I pull them and push them down. His cock is already half mast and I take my hand, licking it with my eyes on him and he smiles and I lower my hand and grip his dick.

“Hmmm” he says feeling the touch of my hand on his cock as I start to stroke him slowly, getting him harder. He grows so quickly, that it excites me even more and I bite my lip still looking at him as I stroke.

“Your cock is so big” I say quietly.

He smiles. “You don’t have to say shit like that just to make me feel better”

I roll my eyes. “I’m not. Your cock is perfect.” I say looking down.

“Fucking look at it” I breathe, watching my hand pump up and down on his hard cock, thick in my hand. “God. I love it” I say feeling myself still wet, and growing even more wet.

“Do you want me to fuck you?” He asks.

I grin and look up.

“Why ? Do you wanna fuck me?” I ask.

He nods.

“What about all the girls outside? Now that you know you’re good at it and lost your virginity, don’t you wanna spread your seed as they say? Isn’t that the male way?” I grin and bite my lip.

He shakes his head.

“Why would I bother with them when I know you and I have great sex?” He asks

I shrug.

“Thought you’d wanna sample the goods of others.” I say.

“Hmmm. Eventually I will.” He says grabbing my hips , pulling me off the counter and undoing my jeans.

“Did he cum in you?” He asks.

I shake my head. “No. And I made him wear a condom” I say.

He smiles. “But you didn’t make me wear one”

“You’re a virgin. You’re clean. And I’m on birth control” I say. “Didn’t need one”

“And you’re clean?” He says as I step out of my jeans and he slides down my panties.

I nod. Because I even though I fuck who I want whenever I want I always make them use protection. Except for when I was younger and first started fucking. But an std scare changed that for me. Thankfully I’ve never had one. It had just been a uti. I wasn’t aware you were supposed to pee after sex. And I get tested regularly as well.

“Good.” He says and plops me back up on the sink counter and I spread my legs and he grabs his cock and rubs his cock along my slit. Both of us looking down between my legs.

“Did he make you cum?” He asks , his eyes looking up and mine do too. I look into his and shake my head.

“Do you want me to make you cum?” He smirks. But his voice is dirty and teasing and his swollen cock is pressing against my pussy ready to slip in.

I nod. “Yes please” I say with a little smirk and he slides it in.

“Oh!” I gasp and grab his shoulders and lift one leg up over his hip.

“Oh my god Finn” I whimper as he thrusts again.

“Fuck. You feel so good inside me” I lick my lips my eyes on his as he thrusts.

“It’s really hard not cum” he says with a groan as he thrusts.

“You can cum if you want” I say. Even though we’ve just started. But I consider it a compliment when guys bust right away. Of course I don’t want them to be “two pump chumps” every time, but he also just lost his virginity yesterday. And while he came pretty quick the first time, throughout the night he was able to last longer each time. Fucking me like he’d been doing it for years.

“No.” He shakes his head. “It feels too good to cum yet”

I grin. “This is so fucked up”

He smiles. “I try not to think about it” he says and his hips slide back and forth , his cock filling me again and again and my pussy is dripping.

“Fuck” I curse feeling his cock drive deeper as he positions me a little differently.

“Fuck me Finn” I moan. “Harder”

His hips go harder, his thrusts deep and grab his face and bring it to mine and I kiss him , we moan into each other’s mouths panting.

“I love how you fuck me” I pant into his mouth.

“Mmm” he groans and bites gently into my lower lip , his hands slipping up my shirt and lifting it, he exposes my tits , I’m braless and his fingers roll over my already hard nipples. He pulls them teasingly. I whimper into his mouth. He lifts my shirt the rest of the way and pulls me into him, my chest against his. I moan feeling my nipples and tits press against his hard chest.

“God Fiona” he groans. “I love the way your body feels” he says his hands running up and down my back, then scooping me off my ass and taking me to the wall.

“Yess” I moan as he crashes us against it and I hold my legs around his waist, arms around his neck.

I pant as he drives his cock in and out of my soaked cunt.

“Fuck” he groans and then sets me down, his cock slipping out of me.

I drop to my knees and take his cock into my mouth and suck him.

“Fuck” he groans as my mouth humms with moans vibrating against his cock , the sound of my wet mouth being fucked filled the bathroom. His hands grab my hair.

“Fuck my mouth” I gasp quickly before closing my mouth back around his cock. My lips hugging his cock as I slide my mouth up and down it’s length.

He guides me, using his hands and the thrust of his hips.

“Shit. Fuck” he curses as I let him use my mouth, he’s careful not fucking my face too hard or deep. So I shove my mouth down further , letting him feel himself in my throat, grabbing his hips as I do.

“Oh shit” he groans and then his thrusts start to reach my throat , his hands being greedy like I want them to be, pulling my mouth onto his cock. I choke and he lets up.

I take my mouth from his cock and gasp.

“Don’t stop. Fuck my mouth Finn.” I say my voice begging for it. I spit on his cock and put it back In my mouth.

He does. This time not stopping when I gag. I moan and whimper. My eyes watering. I look up at him as he fucks my mouth.

“Fuck” he groans and then gets onto the bathroom floor with me and pulls me on top of him.

I grin and sink down on his cock. Both of us letting out a sigh of pleasure to have him back inside me.

“Oh fuck” I whine as I start to ride him. I grind my hips and I bounce my ass. I ride him wildly. My tits bouncing , he groans and grins.

“This is so fucking hot” he says , his hands reaching up to my tits, holding them, rubbing my nipples and pinching them.

“Fucking your sister at a party?” I lick my lips.

He nods.

“The fact either of us could fuck anyone we want and yet we’re up here fucking each other” he says. I grin.

“Cum inside me Finn” I moan as I continue to ride him.

“You’re so fucking hot” I moan leaning down and pressing my tits to his chest , his hands on my ass as I continue to ride.

“Yesss” I moan as his hands help bounce my ass up and down.

“Cum in my pussy” I whimper. “Please Finn” I moan. “Cum inside of me”

“Fuck” his hands grip my ass harder and he thrusts.

“I was gonna eat your pussy” he says

I shake my head panting. “No” I whimper. “Cum with me...please” I whine.

“You’re gonna cum?” He asks

I nod and moan.

“I’m gonna cum Finn” I tell him so there no mistake.

“Cum with me. I’m gonna-“ I stop and squeal as my orgasm beings. I feel my pussy grab onto his cock as it pulses he curses. And he holds me to his chest hard and tight as his thrusts go faster. I stop grinding, unable to move, my orgasm shaking me as I cum all over his cock.

Seconds later he’s cumming inside of me and I moan out , I let out tiny little screams and he keeps thrusting. Grunting. Groaning. Cursing as he cums.

“Fill me” I whimper. “Fill. My. Fucking. Pussy” I step out the words as he thrusts and I feel my orgasm rolling off but my legs still shaking , my body trembling.

Laying on my back on the cold tiled floor beside him, feeling his cum leak out of me. I giggle slightly at how fucking hard we both came.

“What’s so funny?” He asks.

“I think you’ve ruined other guys for me. I don’t know if I’m ever going to have great sex with anyone else ever again , knowing what it’s like to fuck you.”

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