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Pity Pool Fuck [ 12 ]

*commissioned*

"Finn" I pant his name as my back arches, his mouth closed around my nipple, sucking hard as I cum with him. I almost cry at how good it feels, how perfect it feels to cum with him, my orgasm flowing through me, from head to toe, my toes curling as I grasp onto his back as he still thrusts, cumming inside of me, deep. 

He groans my name as he slows and lets himself lay ontop of me a moment as he both pant and I wrap my legs back around him holding him to me, behind my eyelids are stars when I close them basking in the bliss of my orgasm that is coming to and end. I whimper and my fingers curl against his back, he lifts his head, his face sweaty, both of our bodies sticking together with sweat, and he kisses me softly and then pulls out with an inhale. 

I let my legs collapse, and I just lay on my back as he falls onto his beside me and I breathe heavily trying to calm myself , my legs tremble slightly in the after math, and we both lay on our backs staring at the roof of the tree house. 

I let out a slight laugh when I see both of our names written in large black letters along the ceiling of the tree house, along with all of our friends names, and other kids names that used the tree house after us, and some that probably still do. 

He sees our names too and is smiling up at them when I turn my head. 

"If you try to take away sex like that from me again, I will go crazy." I say. 

He laughs and turns his head to look at me. 

"I tried....I fucking tried...." he says.

I roll onto my side and prop up on my elbow and lean over and scoot upward to kiss him. 

"You last all of what....5 minutes ? Before you decided to bring me up here and give me easily the absolute best sex I've ever had?" I cock my brow. 

The corners of his mouth turn up. "Like I said...I tried." 

I kiss him again , my hand on his chest, he turns to his side and pulls me to him, I hook my leg up over his hip. His hand slips up and down my back as we kiss gently and slowly. 


"We have to be careful Fiona" he says. 

I nod and kiss him again, pulling my body closer, and closer, wanting every inch of him against me. He pulls me by my back, I'm already as much against him as I can be. 

"I mean it....we can't be having sex in the backyard....or in the house when mom and dad are home....or in the bathroom at parties full of people we know." he says.

"I know" I say and kiss him again, I roll my hips, and I want more. Right now. He grabs my ass and pulls my legs higher and I feel his cock hard against my pussy.

"Are you actually listening or just agreeing so I'll put my dick back inside you?" he grins. 

I smile and kiss him. "Both."

With my arm thats against the floor, I place that hand on his shoulder. , and with my other hand I reach down, guiding him back in and I moan feeling him fill me once again and slide hand up his arm an grip his shoulder as his hand pulls on my hip, pulling me into him as he thrusts into me. 

"fuck Fiona" he groans and we adjust slightly, he reaches down, grabs my legs from his waist and lifts it, and slips down slightly, angling himself into me, fucking me slightly faster. He groans and then pushes my leg off him, slides out and he pushes me onto my other side as he slides up against me, lifts my leg again and slides back in. I moan and reach my hand behind me, and hold onto the back of his head as I whimper with each thrust. hearing the wet sounds of our bodies fucking. I moan with my hair sticking to my neck and chest, panting as he pushes me onto my stomach next and then , with me laying flat on the floor, fucks me from behind.

He grips my hips and pulls them up, so I'm on my knees, I keep my face to the floor, against that uncomfortable scratchy blanket, my nails digging into it, grasping it as he goes harder.

"Yes" I moan and grip the blanket again, pulling it, ending up scratching my nails against the wooden planks on the floor. 

"Fuck me" I pant. "fuck me Finn" I moan his name and he keeps going, he slows down, his thrusts still hard, still deep. I gasp and push my ass back on his dick, throwing it back on him, wanting it faster. He grips my hips hard, and slows them down, making me take it slow.

"Calm down" he laughs slightly, teasing me. 

We fuck for probably another thirty minutes, our bodies dripping with sweat, me cumming another time, and changing positions, and we finish with me thrown over the bean bag chair, with Finn pulling my hair back and cumming inside of me. 

He laughs slightly when he finishes, pulling out and he gives my ass a playful smack before he falls to the side and collapses.

"Mmmm" I moan when it's over, selfishly wishing I could have cum again, with him. 

Inside the tree house it smells like sex, and it's starting to cool down slightly, but were both sweating terribly as I peel my body from the weird sticky fabric of the bean bag chair and look at him leaning back on his hands, legs stretched out as his head hangs back and he breathes in and out panting. 

"you ok?"I giggle watching his chest rise and fall. He laughs and lifts his head. 

"Youre gonna kill me" he says and I laugh. I giggle at my knees, that a red and scratched up from kneeling on the wooden floor, and that scratch fucking blanket, and his have the same look to them. I point to both of our knees.

"Look at how hard we worked" I say . He laughs and pushes up and on his hands and knees crawls over and kisses my knees. 

"Sorry" he says. 

I laugh. "Dont be....i'll be looking down at them an getting wet when I see the scrapes." He looks up at me and cocks his brow.

"And i'll get unimaginable boners now when I look at mine." he says with a smile. I laugh, grabs his face and kiss him. He grabs a different blanket than the one we've been fucking on and spread it out near the bean bag. He leans back, resting just his head and shoulders into the bean bag and then pulls me to him, with my back to the side of him, and partly on his chest, he pulls the hair from my sticky skin, and it feels good. 

I close my eyes, as his fingertips sweep the baby hairs around my face that have curled with sweat, behind my ears, and brushing them back.

When he's done, I feel his fingers caress the side of my face, his thumb trace over my lips. I kiss his thumb and he kisses the top of my head. 

"This is just as dangerous, ya know" he says. 

"Hmm?" I say my eyes fluttering open and lift both of my legs over his, my feet resting on the other side of him, I can feel the blanket against my naked ass as I sit, curled up against him. 


"This..." he says curling his arm around me. "Holding you.." 

I give a little smile and my eyes blink lazily, because his stroking my hair had me half asleep.

"why is holding me dangerous?" I ask.

"Because....I like it too much......and I'll be the fool that falls for my own sister" he says.

My eyes open wider this time. 

"don't worry" he says, seeing the panic in my eyes.

"I know better." he says. I look down and then back up.

"but....I can't lie when I say it confuses my fucking brain....." he chuckles. "and my dick" he says. I laugh a little. 

"You don't have to hold me afterwards." I say and go to sit up and pull off his lap, but he grabs me and pulls me back.

"I want to Fiona" he says. I look at him, and search his eyes.

"Ok" I say softly and he kisses me and I read my head back on his shoulder, his hand sliding up my back and my arm.

"Whoever gets you....is going to be a lucky girl." I say my fingertip tracing lazy patterns around his chest. 

"Why is that?" he asks. 

"Because being held by you feels safe." I say. 

"I feel like everything is just.....non existent right now....that we could look out of the tree house and be the only two people left on earth....and it'd be ok." I say.

His hand stops moving. 

"Because I'd still have you....here....holding me" I say.

I feel his arm wrap around me, he kisses my head again.

"You'll always have me Fi." he says. 

"I know...but....like this...is different" I say, placing my hand flat to his chest over his heart to feel it thump in his chest.

"I promise to hold you like this whenever you want, or need me to...if you ever don't feel safe...whether it's tomorrow, or in ten years, when you're married and have kids.....I'll fucking hold you if you need me to." he says. 

I lift my head and look at him and shake my head. 

"you were right....holding each other is dangerous" I say. 

He looks at me and I lean in and kiss him. His lips kiss back softly. 

"I know" he says. 

"But I dont want to stop" I say and lay my head back down and wrap my arm over his chest and he pulls me closer as I curl up into him..

"Me either Fi." he says. 

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We sit there , holding each other, until our breathing has returned to normal , and our bodies are no longer over heating. 

We slide our clothes back on, and I have a difficult time with my jeans, pulling them up over my sticky , still slightly damp skin, from the sweat. But after we are both dressed we climb out of the tree house and then we stand looking up at it together.

"you think were the first people to have sex in it?" He asks. 

I laugh. "Nope" 

he laughs. "how can you be so sure?"

"Because Jess lost her virginity up there" I say of my close friend, who lost her's at 12, to a 15 year old boy when she first moved to our neighborhood. And like the little aspiring jezebel I was, I befriended her when people tried to make fun of her for it. Girls do stupid things to fit in when we're young, and me and my friends, we all moved way too fast back then, to feel special, to feel wanted. We still do. It's what I do with Jace. I've always needed him to want me, and I don't know why. Maybe cause he was the first boy I loved. I wasn't in TRUE love with him of course, but he was the first that had my heart and broke it. So, I guess he'll always have a part of it, to constantly take and smash over and over again as he pleases, even if he does so without knowing it.


Finn laughs. "Oh. Good for Jess I guess" he says and I laugh, and we walk from the woods, off the property and back to our house.

Our parents are pulling out of the driveway as we walk up.

"Where the heck did you two go?" my mother says looking out of her rolled down passenger window as my dad rolls the car up next to us. 


"Down to the pond, and the tree house" I say, both me and Finn laughing. 

"Aww" My mother says. "You guys havent gone in that tree house in years!" she squeals. Because she's probably thinking of us up there, playing like we did when we were kids. We were playing alright, I think to myself and smile at my mother who is telling us that they're on their way to our Aunt and Uncles for an exhilarating night of Yahtzee and finger foods, then they're going to "Docks" by the lake for dancing and a cover band of some sort. I picture my mom doing the good ole, old lady finger point. I laugh. 

Me and my brother wave as they drive off, and we both go into the house. I make a sound of disgust as I peel my hair from the back of my neck. 

"I need a shower" I say and go to the stairs.

"Can I join?" he waggles his brows at me. 

'No" I laugh. " I need an ACTUAL shower, not one where I'm distracted by you and your dick magic" I say.

He throws his head back with a laugh. "Ok, ok, guess I'll take mine after then." 

After my shower I text Finn and tell him it's free. While I slip on a pair of small, pink plaid pajama shorts. They're loose, but short, and I throw on a tight baby pink sleep tank, that has little white bunny shapes on it and go down stairs. 

About 15 minutes laters Finn is down stairs and we both cock our eyebrows at one another. Him while eying my short little pajama shorts as I stand at the kitchen counter making a salad, and mine at his loose fitting grey sweat pants and the white tee. I bite my lip.

"Jesus, you just HAD to wear grey sweatpants huh?" I squint my eyes and he laughs slightly. 

"And YOU just HAD to wear a tight little top and pajamas shorts that dont even cover your ass?" he says walking over.

"They cover my ass!" I object.

"Yeah?" he says, his hand sliding over my ass, down the back of my shorts, and his fingers skim the part of my ass that's exposed and along under the crease and curve of where my legs meet my ass.

"What's this then, hmm?" he says 

"Fine...they cover MOST of it" I say, and he laughs and looks to my salad

"I can make you something to eat" he says.

I scrunch my nose. "As cute as that is, thank you, but I'm fine with just a salad, I've been craving one for some reason" I say and he stands behind me, hands on my hips, lowering his chin to my shoulder, as I cut up little cherry tomatoes.

I pause with the knife in my hand as his hands roam up and down my sides.

"you're going to make me cut a finger off if you keep touching me." I say.

My eyes close when I feel his mouth on my neck. my hair cleared entirely, still wet , up in a ballerina style bun on my head. 

"then put it down and let me touch you" he says against my ear.

"finn" I giggle slightly as he takes the knife gently, and sets it down. 

"I can make you say my name louder if you want" he teases against my ear, I laugh slightly and so does he, as his hand slips down over my pajamas shorts between my legs. I spread my legs slightly willingly. I place my hands on the counter, his other hand snaking up under my tank top, grabbing one of my breasts. 

I moan slightly, my eyes still closed and I let out a small breath as he rubs my pussy through my shorts, and he pushes his hard cock against my ass through my shorts. 

"Finn" I moan again as his fingers pinch my nipple and I hiss a breath inward and then exhale a tiny whimper. 

He pulls his hand away from my pussy, his hand slides out of my top and he kisses my neck again, then my cheek.

"Finish making your salad." he says and turns and goes to the fridge.

"Jerk" I mumble, and hear him chuckle as I'm left dazed for a moment at the cutting board. 


He makes himself a sandwich, and we both sit on the couch , eating while watching tv. Stealing flirty glance at one another, him cocking his brow at me, and me scrunching my nose , or sticking out my tongue at him. 


I doubt it will last long, but when we're done we pick a movie to watch and we lay down on the couch together, my back to his chest, his arm curled around me.

"behave" I say when I feel his dick get hard against my ass. 

"That....I can't help....it's been hard the whole fucking time." he says. 

I giggle. "Well just dont try any funny business, I actually want to watch this." I say. 

"hmm...I'll do my best." he says, kissing the back of my head. 

I smile at the tv and bite my lip, hoping deep down he fails, and placing bets with myself on how long it will take him to fail.. 



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