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Carmen and Lucian [ 4 ]

*commissioned win*

"Your brother will kill me." Jeff says , even though he closes the door behind him and locks it and walks over to where Carmen pushes up on her knees and pushes down on the hips of her sweatpants.

"First of all......he's my STEP brother...second..he doesn't dictate what I do for fun." Carmen says as Jeff's eyes take in her body, licking his lip as his cock grows at the sight of her. 

"Carmen" he groans as she pushes down her sweats and then sits on her ass and pushes them off her legs and spreads herself, slipping her feet apart across the bed. 

She needs to do this, she tells herself. Lucian can't want her. While he might possibly be just drunk and confused at the moment, she can't risk him waking up tomorrow and still wanting her. Screwing his best friend should take care of that. 

"The party..." Jeff says, as he eyes her pussy, his mouth watering, cock throbbing. 

"Can wait..you think you can last all night or something Jeffy?" she teases and slips and hand between her legs. 

His eyes flick up to hers and she smirks. 

"you can try..." she says taunting as she rubs her clit and Jeff inhales deeply. Exhaling heavily. 

"Grab a condom from my dresser and get over here." she tells him and Jeff groans. 

"Fuck...he's gonna kill me" Jeff shakes his head and Carmen smirks.

Jeff turns and walks to the dresser. 

"Top right...under my panties" Carmen says and Jeff groans as he opens up a drawer full of lacy panties, his hands fumbling to find the shiny silver packages he knows so well. 

"hurry' Carmen moans , rubbing herself and Jeff plucks the strip from the bottom and darts over to the bed, tossing them onto the bed. 

"how do you want me?" Carmen asks sinking a finger into her pussy as Jeff watches lifting his shirt off and then quickly undoing his pants. 

"Fuck...just like that...ontop...bent over...any fucking way you want Car" he says and she smirks as his hard cock springs free. 

She chews her lip, and slides her finger out. 

"Tease me with it first" she moans laying back and Jeff gets onto the bed and between Carmen's legs. 

"Shit" he groans as he feels his skin brush hers, both of them naked. 

"God damn Car" he groans and then lets his cock push against her pussy as he leans down. 

"I've wanted to fuck you so bad" he says and his cock nudges her harder and she moans and the pressure against her hole, and over her clit as it slips up along her pussy. 

"You have no fucking idea" he says and Carmen smiles. 

"I had a little bit of an idea" she teases him and reaches down and grabs his cock and jerks him off and her groans, thrusting into her hand. 

"Fuck" he groans Carmen giggles. 

"You're so hard Jeffy" she licks her upper lip and he grins. 

"Jeffy huh?" he cocks his brow at the brand new nickname. 

"Mhm" she hums and strokes him faster. 

"Carmeeeeennnnn" , the voice startling them both from outside her door, loud and whining, accompanied by a consistent fist, pounding the door. 

"shit" Jeff, hops off Carmen. 

"Stop,,,no...come here" Carmen whispers. 

Jeff's eyes bulge. "Are you crazy?" 

Carmen rolls her eyes. 

"He cant get in." she says as Jeff already has his feet in his pants and pulls them up.

"Oh come on" she huffs and rolls her eyes.

"Carmennnnnn" Lucian wails his fist on the door.

"Open up i know yourreinthere"  he slurs and Carmen rolls her eyes as Jeff pulls on his shirt and she goes to the door. 

"What are you doing?!" Jeff hisses. 

Carmen grabs her robe off the  back of the door and throws it out and then opens the door. Because, it didnt matter they hadnt done anything, the scene alone would be enough to deter her step brother from thinking he wanted her. 

"Carmen!" Lucian says sounding relieved and smiling with his eyes half open and trying to focus on her, and his eyes swim around trying to focus on the figure behind her.

"Shit" Jeff mutters, and both Carmen and Jeff watch Lucian's face go slack. He blinks hard and then shakes his head as if trying to clear it. 

"What..." Lucian says and looks to Carmen who stands there plainly.

"what do you want Lucian?" she asks and his brows pinch. 

Lucian looks to Jeff, and Jeff can tell, that Lucian is too drunk to get angry right now, that Lucian is feeling the betrayal right now. 

"fuck this" Lucian says , his hands on the doorframe holding his drunken frame up, and goes to turn but then stumbles and falls on his ass with a thud. 

"What the fuck Car" Jeff says and pushes past her, and over Lucian, and walks right out into the hall , leaving a drunk Lucian groaning on the floor with Carmen standing there. 

Carmen sighs looking down at her drunk step brother trying to lift himself from the floor, and pushing up, and then falling over. 

Carmen sighs heavily.

"Jesus Loosh" she says and he looks up. 

"you fuckhim?" he says scowling his eyes practically closed as he lifts his head in her direction. 

"No." Carmen says and walks back a few steps. 

"I'm not trying to lift you...so fucking crawl in...come on..." she says gesturing for him. 

She bites back a laugh as Lucian rolls and crawls across her floor. 

"you wan fuckim? " he says halfway to her bed.

"Yes." Carmen lies.  Why did she feel the need to lie? she could simply tell  Lucian she would never have sex with him, he was her step brother after all. Why was she trying to piss him off by sleeping with his best friend? 

"dont" he says with  groan.

"Dont what?" Carmen asks and Lucian finally makes it to the bed, and reaches up and pulls himself up onto her bed, collapsing. 

"fuckim" he says. 

"You're way too drunk right now." Carmen says and Lucian lifts his head, it wobbles as he fights to hold it. 

"dont matter" he says and drops his head. 

"he cant have you" Lucian says and lifts aheavy hand to his chest. 

"You are mine" he says and heaves a sigh his eyes closing.

Carmen rolls her eyes and walks over and lifts his legs, turning him so he lays on her bed, his head near her pillows. Lucian grumbles as he tries to shift his body. .

"I'm not talking about this with you Lucian. I am not yours. End of." she tells him and pulls the covers back and throws them over him.

"bullshit" he scowls with his eyes shut. 

" i saw you first" he says and Carmen just lets out an amused laugh.

"because thats how it works?" She asks him, knowing its pointless to talk to him like this. 

"Because you think you want me...I have to agree...and everyone else has to back off?" she asks and Lucian gives a faint nod.

"yup" he says

"I bet your pussy feels so good" he murmurs.

"Oh god Lucian!" she says and slaps his chest, swatting him. 

"u get real wet too i bet" he says and reaches down and grabs his dick. 

"Lucian! Get your hands off yourself!" she yells at him, but he's too drunk, and her eyes widen, realizing his grip is around a firm erection in his pants. A thick....large...erection. 


"Lucian stop!" she commands again. 

"I wanna lick your pussy" he says. 

"Lucian!" Carmen yells, just watching as her drunk step brother touches himself with his eyes closed. 

"want you to suck my cock" he says and his hands start to drunkenly try to undo his pants. 

"Wanna cum in your mouth Carmen" he says his hands giving up and he groans and grabs his cock through his pants. 

Carmen just stands slack jawed. 

"I watched you" he mumbles and rubs his dick through his pants. 

"the shower"  he groans. 

"One time" he says and grips his cock. 

"when you first moved in" he groans loudly. 

"you drove me crazy" he says.

"steal your panties." he says and Carmen's eyes just widen even more at his admission. 

"i keep em in my dresser" he says.

"i have so many" he says. 

"i taste them....smell them" he groans. 

"Lucian." Carmen says, barely audible, feeling his admissions draw heat between her thighs and her belly. 

"lets fuck Carmen" he groans and strokes himself through his pants. 

"let me give you this dick" he says and her jaw drops. 

she chews her lips, and shakes her head. 

"Go to bed Loosh" she says.

He groans. "call me that when i'm inside you" 

Jesus. Carmen shakes her head and lifts her hands to her face just staring at Lucian on her bed , covers kicked down, hands on his cock and he keeps going. 

"i'm gunna kick Jeff's asss" he slurs. 

"kick anthony's too" he murmurs, his hand slowing as he threatens the guy that Carmen hooked up with earlier. 

Carmen walks over and pulls the covers back up and then walks around and crawls into bed and over the covers and lays beside a now quiet Lucian, who just mumbles incoherently now.

"you fucking fool" she says quietly, and lifts a hand to his forehead and pushes back his hair. Repeating the gesture again and again slowly, soothing her step brothers drunk ass to sleep. 

Watching his lips slowly stop mumbling and his breathing just come out heavy and steady, with the slightest snore. She smiles down at him shaking her head. 

"big idiot" she says and slides down, laying beside him on her side, looking at him as he lays on his back. 

She bites her lips with a little bit of a smile. She hates how Lucian was possessive and protective of her, but was this really why? She smiled a bit a wider. He wanted her? Really? 

She was sure he was just being drunk and stupid at first, but it made sense for it to be true. It made sense as to why he never wanted his friends or even other random guys around her. Why he hated every single one of the guys she dated or was interested in. 

Lifting up and leaning over, she kissed his cheek softly.

"Night Loosh" she whispered and settled back down, reaching an arm across him, and holding onto him as she closed her eyes to fall asleep beside him. 



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